Monday, January 30, 2017

truth or dare

- truth or dare?
- truth.
i never chose dare, cause i used to have nothing to hide, so i choose truth without thinking. 
- ok. ummm. [examines my face] what are you thinking right now? [heartbeat in my ears] 
i like the sound of your voice and the way your arm is slung across the top of the car and your tired, pretty eyes, and the way you're looking at me 
- [laughs] that i'm scared of what you're gonna ask me 
you laugh and take a step back and forward and i'm waiting on cliff's edge for the next question
do you love me?
     but it never comes
     and the game goes on

53 comments:

  1. Woah my heart
    *Whispers* this is beautiful

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  2. how is it that you can take only a few, simple words and make them the most beautiful things ever?? <3333

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    1. WELL I MEAN YOU JUST DID THE SAME THING IN THIS COMMENT :')

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  3. The whole point is to love and be loved. The rest is story.

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  4. wow. okay this is beautiful <3 your writing is so, so amazing. LOVE THIS.

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    1. awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :') THANK YOU

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  6. wow okay it's not like I needed my heart anyway

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    1. bc it just broke into like seven gajillion pieces but it's fine

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    2. ok dude that's fine
      (but rly thanks that means a lot)

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  7. ohhhhhhhhh
    oh
    this is so pretty and the psychological metaphor going on is jut on point.

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  8. I

    LOVE

    THIS

    SO

    FREAKING

    MUCHHHHHHhhhHhhHhHhhhHHHhhhhhhHHHHH

    cri :')

    Please tell me this at least has a grain of non-fiction in it.

    It's perfect and so are you and I'm crying. I love you.

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    1. I mean I know we already talked about this but THANK YOU SO MUCH ALKFJSD. and yeah maybe a little bit hahhhhhhhhh

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  9. absolutely beautiful :) I love this so much

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  10. *struggles to walk away bc my head just exploded*

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  11. WHAAAAAAATTT JUST HAPPENNNNEEDDDD <3

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    1. GAHHHHHHHHHH <3333333333333333333333333333333333333

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  12. oh yeah that was just the sound of my breaking heart
    thissss though oh my goodness

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  13. I don't understand olivia I just don't understand

    your writing

    I just do not understand it's amazing

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    1. close to tears rn but it's fine LOL thank you SoooOOOOOOOooO much

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  14. Okay this was the most gorgeous thing I've ever read

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  15. These are my favorite kind of things to write.
    I frigging loved this.
    New follower babe, you. are. rad.
    http://hannahofthefield.blogspot.com/

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    1. Why are so fabulous this comment made me feel like the queen HAHA
      Thank you so much for reading!!!!!!!!!!! <3 brb stalking your blog ;)

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  16. this made me feel so many different things at once <3
    it makes me want more and more. i just wanna read moreeeeeeee!!!!!!!

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    1. alkdfjsldfjd that is such a huge compliment, Lauren. thank YOU <3

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    1. you're too sweeeeeeeeeet. thank you so much for reading and commenting :')

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  18. Oh my goodness. I feel like I just read a scene out of my favorite book, and the feels are as strong as ever! This is lovely.<3

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    1. OH MY GRACIOUS this is such a huge compliment close to crai-ing :')

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  19. Wow, I have no words, just wow. Like, I feel this so much... 😍

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    1. how do you know how to make me flail with your comments alkdfjsdl <3

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  20. This post is truth in it of itself. <3 Thank you for sharing.

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  21. DUDE THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS

    Hanne
    rockandminerals4him.wordpress.com

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    1. DUDE DUDE DUDE. THANK YOU SO MUCH IDEKLSKDFJ.

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  22. Your writing style is so vivid and descriptive! Inspiration level: off the charts ����
    - www.goldenpupils.wixsite.com/sarahelizabeth

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    1. *blushes profusely* crying that I could ever inspire u. THANK YOU SARAH <3

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  23. Wow. Now I need to read MORE. You're such a great writer. =D

    Micaiah
    www.notebooksandnovels.com

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    1. THERE MAY OR MAY NOT BE MORE WHERE THAT CAME FROM ;) THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!

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  24. ....i just....wow....um.....my heart.
    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. AAAH.
    <3

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    1. alskdjflsdkjf my literal exact reaction to you and your comment^
      THANK YOU, QUEEN

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