- truth or dare?
- truth.
i never chose dare, cause i used to have nothing to hide, so i choose truth without thinking.
- ok. ummm. [examines my face] what are you thinking right now? [heartbeat in my ears]
i like the sound of your voice and the way your arm is slung across the top of the car and your tired, pretty eyes, and the way you're looking at me
- [laughs] that i'm scared of what you're gonna ask me
you laugh and take a step back and forward and i'm waiting on cliff's edge for the next question
do you love me?
but it never comes
and the game goes on
Woah my heart
ReplyDelete*Whispers* this is beautiful
*stage whispers* THANKS DUDE
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DeleteThe whole point is to love and be loved. The rest is story.
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cri :')
Please tell me this at least has a grain of non-fiction in it.
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