Friday, November 4, 2016

for you

what would I do for you

I look up into the stars
and I see your eyes
and I know I would go that far for you
what would I do for you
if you asked I'm afraid
I don't know when I 'd stop giving
I'd give it all for you
what would I do for you
you don't have to ask I'm afraid
I've already given my heart to you
I couldn't take it back if I wanted to
but would you ever do the same for me



30 comments:

  1. ......

    you hear that? that's my heart shattering into a billion pieces because this was beautiful okay

    (hugs this post because THIS POST)

    Katie katieconfetti.blogspot.com

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    1. ALSKDFJSLKDFJLDKSFJLKSDJFKA.
      you hear that? that is me dying because of your words OKAY. hugs because YOU. <3 THANK YOU, KATIE :')

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  2. oh my gosh how is this so true. So earth shaking, ground breaking...true...

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    1. cries bc your comment is more poetic than my post

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  3. OLIVIA. I am shattered. This is so beautiful. You are beautiful.

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  4. Oh my gosh, THIS
    You have such a gift with words! 😭😭😭

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  5. Goodness, your writing is just so...emotional. I love it. Every time I read your blog I know I'm going to step away feeling like I experienced an artistic, breathless piece of poetry. Love the visual element of the stars, too...just great! :-)

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    1. OH MY WORD, ERIN. EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOUR COMMENTS JUST MAKES ME SWELL UP WITH HAPPY FEELS. <3 thank you so much for your words alskdfjlsdkf. :')

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  6. I feel like this is one of those end pages of a novel, and you're tearing around at the back of the book like "nononono there has to be mooooaarrr"

    Write a bestseller ok? Ok.

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  7. I WANT TO HUG THIS POST. GAH THE FEELZ
    <33

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  8. help me aHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHSHSLHAHALIHFEDLI

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    1. aijfliwesrfjdkjsfld oK BUT ONLY IF U HELP ME 2 OK

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  9. This is so bold and beautiful, Olivia!!! <3
    XOXO
    http://everythingisbetterwithpolkadots.blogspot.com/

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    1. wow thank you so much for reading and commenting :') xxxx

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  10. Ughhhh!! This is beautiful!!! #feel #allthefeels

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    1. thanks, hannah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 :')

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  11. This just punched me little face, and now I'm sad but that's okay. This is beautiful <3

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    1. sRY FOR MAKING YOU SAD but I'm honored that my words would make you feel tbh :') xoxoxoxoxo

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  12. "I don't know when I'd stop giving" real. <3

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    1. nEiTHer cAN i TBH.
      <3 <3 <# <# <# <3
      ^ gets too excited about ur comment

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