we're alone with the glow of the embers and distant pinpricks of white lights in the dark sky above
and it's cold and you look at me and you're laughing
and all of a sudden all the rest fades away
and all I can think of is a string of words I read somewhere at a time that wasn't tonight
'the kind of smile that would be cruel not to kiss'
so I did
...
I wasn't gonna post this
but then I did
Oh my freaking goodness I love this so much and if this isn't fictional then we need to talk. XD
ReplyDelete*looks at Grace Anne* *nods*
Delete*waits*
LOL I HAVE NO LOVE LIFE THIS IS VERY FICTIONAL LOLOLOL.
Deleteplus I imagined it from a guy's perspective so.
THANKS FOR LOVING IT THOUGH LOLOLOL. xoxoxo to both of you
*gasp* a guys perspective! I LIKE IT! I *love it! Your work is just great! I want this to be my love life
DeleteThis is so sweet! <3
ReplyDeleteXOXO
YOU ARE SO SWEET :')
Deletexoxo
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH It's so simple but sweet and perfect and GAAAH
ReplyDelete<3
If you hadn't posted this it would have been mean. This is literally the cutest.
ReplyDeleteSO MANY FEELS.
ReplyDeleteThis is so sweet and cute and askdfjlfaf
so freaking cute
ReplyDeleteTHIS. THE CUTEST. AH.
ReplyDelete- Aimee (To the Barricade!)
This is absolutely gorgeous <3
ReplyDeleteEllie | On the Other Side of Reality
I love coming across blogs randomly that unexpectedly take my breath away. Your poems are amazing. I'm excited to get to know you more through your pieces of art!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MY WORD. When I first read it I thought it was real and I was like NO WAY. Haha So beautiful!! You are one extraordinary writer. ♥♥
ReplyDelete~Megan<333
(megans-journals.blogspot.com)
I just want to stand up and applaud every time I read your posts. They're just pure poetry. Never stop writing! Loved this.
ReplyDeleteMy heart. Ow.
ReplyDeleteThis is so good. I devoured every character.
xx Mackenzie
Again, I love your style :)
ReplyDeleteokay, so, I had a comment all written out but I started flailing so hard that my computer glitched or something and it was gone LOL
ReplyDeleteBUT THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL LOVE THING I HAVE EVER READ
LIKE LITERALLY
IM DANFSFINDOIADKNFOWIJ
WAAAAAT ♥ OH. MAN.
ReplyDeletehonestly, this is just sublime. you are sublime. I echo Erin-- never ever ever ever stop writing, Olivia.
WOWOWIWOWWOW THIS POEM PUNCHED MA HEART
ReplyDeletei love this so much and you're super talented!!
*squeals in an inaudible fangirl kind of way* This. <3
ReplyDelete*dies becuase this is perfect*
ReplyDeleteLIKE. WOW.