Wednesday, November 23, 2016

so I did

we're alone with the glow of the embers and distant pinpricks of white lights in the dark sky above
and it's cold and you look at me and you're laughing
and all of a sudden all the rest fades away
and all I can think of is a string of words I read somewhere at a time that wasn't tonight
'the kind of smile that would be cruel not to kiss'
so I did

...
I wasn't gonna post this 
but then I did

22 comments:

  1. Oh my freaking goodness I love this so much and if this isn't fictional then we need to talk. XD

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    1. *looks at Grace Anne* *nods*

      *waits*

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    2. LOL I HAVE NO LOVE LIFE THIS IS VERY FICTIONAL LOLOLOL.
      plus I imagined it from a guy's perspective so.
      THANKS FOR LOVING IT THOUGH LOLOLOL. xoxoxo to both of you

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    3. *gasp* a guys perspective! I LIKE IT! I *love it! Your work is just great! I want this to be my love life

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  2. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH It's so simple but sweet and perfect and GAAAH
    <3

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  3. If you hadn't posted this it would have been mean. This is literally the cutest.

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  4. SO MANY FEELS.
    This is so sweet and cute and askdfjlfaf

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  5. I love coming across blogs randomly that unexpectedly take my breath away. Your poems are amazing. I'm excited to get to know you more through your pieces of art!

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  6. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MY WORD. When I first read it I thought it was real and I was like NO WAY. Haha So beautiful!! You are one extraordinary writer. ♥♥

    ~Megan<333
    (megans-journals.blogspot.com)

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  7. I just want to stand up and applaud every time I read your posts. They're just pure poetry. Never stop writing! Loved this.

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  8. My heart. Ow.

    This is so good. I devoured every character.

    xx Mackenzie

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  9. okay, so, I had a comment all written out but I started flailing so hard that my computer glitched or something and it was gone LOL

    BUT THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL LOVE THING I HAVE EVER READ

    LIKE LITERALLY

    IM DANFSFINDOIADKNFOWIJ

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  10. WAAAAAT ♥ OH. MAN.

    honestly, this is just sublime. you are sublime. I echo Erin-- never ever ever ever stop writing, Olivia.

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  11. WOWOWIWOWWOW THIS POEM PUNCHED MA HEART
    i love this so much and you're super talented!!

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  12. *squeals in an inaudible fangirl kind of way* This. <3

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  13. *dies becuase this is perfect*
    LIKE. WOW.

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