Friday, August 4, 2017

incomplete


why did you have to plan it like that
so I never even got to say goodbye
cause I know you hate goodbyes
and I do too
but I love you more than I hate goodbyes
and I wanted to tell you to call me
when there's no one left to talk to
when you can't think of the lyrics to match the chords
when you finally meet the girl
I wanted to tell you to come back
I wanted to tell you that-
I-
but I guess you already know that
so here's my [incomplete] goodbye
the one you'll never hear

32 comments:

  1. Lovely per usual, Liv. Miss you bunches. <3
    - Melinda

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  2. LIV.

    I'M CRYING.

    And maybe it's just because I know you but oh lord I'm crying. Leave it to you to stab me in the heart when I least expect it. Love you so much wowowowow please never stop writing.

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    1. YOU KILL ME WITH THESE COMMENTS. GOOD GRACIOUS. LOVE YOU TOO WOWOW. ok. :')

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  3. "I love you more than I hate goodbyes" Ugh I feel this so hard!!

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    1. THAT MEANS SO MUCH, HANNAH :') thank you for reading gahh

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  4. Man this hit me hard, you have no idea how much I can relate to it. <3 Gorgeous as always Livs. <3

    Anna - www.worldthroughherheart.blogspot.com

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    1. Oh my word. FEELS. Thank you times a million. alkejrlwkerj. <3 <3 <3

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  5. This stings. Goodbyes are some of the most brutal things to the soul but gah. I am left stunned and wordless. Is this based off something that happened to you?

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    1. RIGHT. GOODBYES SUCK. thank you so much :') :')

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  6. I'm literally crying, and by literally, I don't mean figuratively.
    <3 <3 <3
    sending so much love your way,
    xoxo,

    Lizzy

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    1. Welp, same. THANK YOU SO MUCH SENDING MORE LOVE YOUR WAY <3 <3 <3

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  7. WOW. This is beautiful - my heart's crying...

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  8. "I love you more than I hate goodbyes."
    THAT HIT ME. BECAUSE THAT'S ACTUALLY SOMETHING I HAVE A MAJOR PROBLEM WITH. Thanks for posting this. It's beautiful.

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    1. THAT MEANS LIKE THE WORLD OH MY GOSH THANKS, EVANGELINE :') oF COuRsE, thank YOU

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  9. I'm not even mad that you don't share beautiful words with us every day because THIS.
    thanks for being brave.
    xxoxox

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    1. WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW you're actually the queen thank you so freakin much crying xoxoxo

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  10. dang, Olivia. wish i could give you the greatest biggest hug rn

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    1. wow wish i could hug you right back love you tons

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  11. This is so deep and beautiful and perfect and gahhhhh. <3 #youreamazing

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    1. LOL NO YOU are amazing. THANK YOU SO MUCH MACKENZIE <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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  12. This was beautiful...you certainly have a way with words!
    ~Kathryn

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    1. Thank you so much, Kathryn!!!!!!!!!! That is so nice of you to say :''''''''''''''''''')

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  13. Wow. Ouch. This is too beautiful. <3 <3

    Sophy

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  14. i read this on my phone in the middle of a crowded building, and i had one of those moments where your heart stops and you know nobody can hear it, but you can. and everything sort of slows down for a moment. and you just have to let yourself ache there, because there's nowhere else to do it.

    it's good. sometimes you just have to ache. until it's all out. thank you. i love you. i learned to love even in this... even when it was happening to me.
    xx

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  15. Wow, this was beautiful. Amazing job!

    iviewrites.blogspot.com

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  16. You're always capturing a moment, and giving me the feels. GOODNESS! <3

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