once upon a time there was a girl and a boy
and they were kids and they lived
together
in different little houses
in a little neighborhood
on the same road
and they ate popscicles on the porch in the late morning
and they ran barefoot down dusty worn paths
and they played and laughed and said goodbye at night
once upon a time there was a lady and a man
and they were young and they lived
together
in a small apartment
in a tall building
in a big city
and they sat in the warm morning sunlight
and they cooked on their tiny stove in the evening
and they held each other at night
once upon a time there was a lady and a man
and they were grown up and they lived
together
in a cheap suburban house
in a neighborhood
in a medium sized town
and they took their kids to school at dawn
and they drove and biked to and from work
and still they held each other at night
once upon a time there was a lady and a man
and they were old and they lived
together
in quaint white house
in the country
in the way out country
and they sat on their front porch in the morning light
and they sat and read books in the rainy afternoon
and they held each other even closer at night
once upon a time there was a lady and a man
and they were at peace and they lived and died
together
and it was enough
Having to read this twice, once without the music and one with the music. It makes a difference. This poem is sweet. SWEET is the right word for this poem.
ReplyDeleteUm, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!! And I agree with Vanessa, it's incredibly sweet x)
ReplyDeleteAWWWW so much love... this would be a gorgeous little short film!!! I do miss you in your absences though- I just love your stuff!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is adorable, and seriously spoke to my heart in a way I can't describe. Is it really terrible I want a love life this sweet, and simple?
ReplyDeleteAWWAHHH! OLIVIA, OH MY HEART...IT FLEW AWAY! THIS IS SO INCREDIBLY AMAZING AND SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL!
ReplyDeleteI loved this.
ReplyDeleteOkay I am kinda obsessed with this. Like: THE IMAGERY. The WORDS. The GORGEOUSNESS. *dies squealing*
ReplyDeleteOlivia, omw, you are CRAZY TALENTED. <33333
That was such an amazing yet sweetly simple poem...ohmyworddd Olivia, the feels. I can't even.
ReplyDeleteI was deeply touched by the words you wrote. They really were beautiful.
-T.
x
OLIVIA.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful and sweet and agh :') You're perfect
THIS IS SO SWEET AND LOVELY <3 like your writing is really simple but it cuts to the heart. so i'm not sure exactly how to describe it but LOVELY comes pretty close.
ReplyDeleteOHHH MY GLORY. this. is. so sweet. its just perfect, and i think it captures the simplicity of love SO WELL. AAAHHH MY HEART. <3 <3 <3
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words!
ReplyDeleteOH MY GOODNESS.
ReplyDeleteTHIS GAVE ME A BUCKET OF FEELS!
^^^AND WHAT SAMI SAID ABOUT THE SIMPLICITY WOW
I'm going to read this another time.
this is so beautiful. in simplicity and extravagance. in a homey way that makes growing up not so harsh.
ReplyDeleteAND BEN RECTOR!!! I actually didn't read it to the song at first (because it will distract me), but like an obedient little reader I clicked play and read it again!
Your writing is so simple and lovely! Wow!!
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I adore your work, your writing is amazing and this is only the first piece I've read! I followed you on bloglovin, it'd mean so much if you could check out my blog and maybe follow back! Much love Holly xo
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Oh my gosh this is beautiful! I love how you stringed together a wonderful story in so short of a time. Absolutely lovely <3
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I'm not crying, you're crying! *sniffles* That was lovely, so beautiful in fact that I read it twice.
ReplyDeleteOH LOOK WHERE DID ALL THAT BLOOD COME FROM?? MUST HAVE BEEN MY HEART.
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dun. u slain meh.
also yes i read this without clicking on the song and then i read your footnote (LOLOLOL IT WAS A FOOTNOTE WITH A PICTURE OF YOUR FEET haha omg ignore my bad puns they'll go away eventually) so i went back up and clicked on the link and listened to the song while reading it again bc i'm a gud gurl and i do what i'm told. ;) sometimes. AHEM.
Deleteoh man abbie thAT PUN IS THE BEST PUN EVER. AND OLIVIA...WHAT ABBIE SAID...SLAYED. OK.
DeleteThis makes me want a relationship made for the books <3
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btw, so totally honored to be your 100th follower. *laughs awkwardly*
ReplyDeleteI didn't so naturally I had to go back and listen to forever like that and read it all over again. aw man just discovering (slowllly one song at a time over this whole summer) the wonders of ben rector. *happiness (he's got a kinda mat kearney vibe doesn't he?)
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