Friday, December 8, 2017

didn't expect you

I don't know. I guess I just didn't expect to be so surprised by you. I didn't expect you to come down the steps with sleepy eyes in the early morning light. I didn't mean to catch you so unsuspecting in your natural habitat. But it didn't seem to bother you. You didn't seem in any rush to leave. I guess I didn't expect that either.
I didn't expect you to be unshaven, drinking coffee from your mug on the couch across from me. I didn't expect the familiarity to be so comfortable. I didn't expect your muscled arm so close to mine. I didn't expect you to call me by name when you said goodbye. I didn't expect the only other person there to notice the way your eyes followed me out to my car.
I don't know. I guess I just didn't expect you.

 ps if any of you want to read the final draft of my last post
comment your email address below pls and I'll send it to you
thx xoxo

44 comments:

  1. your writing is so beautiful, I love it <3

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  2. I am wondering who the person is that you are writing about or if the story is fiction or nonfiction. Either way I love the sense of wonder it leaves me with. Your writing is my favorite! <3
    Email address: simplyperfectone@gmail.com I'd love to read the final draft!

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    1. eh it's usually a mix x) thank you so much, vanessa!!!! your comments always make my day oh and I will send the final out soon!!

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  3. u have my email, babe. also this is something that i know, though it is smol and simple. ohoh. x

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    1. "though it is smol and simple"
      ^^^ reasons why i love u
      HAHA thank u lots xoxo

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    1. aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :''') <3

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  5. So beautiful! Ahhhhh! :) OMW, yes I want the final draft lol (You know my email, but here it is: fervent4him2003@gmail.com)

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  6. girl girl wow. just woaaaaaw i can so totally relate to this. like all the way. this is beautiful <3 i'm gonna come back and read it over and over

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    1. wowowoowowowowowoowowow
      u give me all the feels oh my gosh
      thank you thank you thank you <3

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  7. Whoa, so heartfelt and so insightful!!!! <3

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    1. WHAT you are so kind thank you so much for reading and commenting, amelia!! <3

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  8. HOW YOU MANAGE TO BLOW ME AWAY EVERY TIME IS BESIDE ME

    I’M SOBBING. I CANT. TOO MANY FEELS.

    A couple other things: Write more to this. I need more. Teach me your ways. You are a writing goddess. Pizza is good. Please give me more.

    xx Kenzie

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    1. MACKENZIE RAE
      WHY ARE YOU SLAYING ME ON A DAILY BASIS WITH YOUR COMMENTS ON HERE
      YOU ARE LITERALLY AMAZING AND WOW MIGHT CRY AT THE SUPPORT :''D YOU INSPIRE ME THANK YOU IM NOT OKAY <3 <# <3 <3 <3 ALSO PIZZA

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  9. This is so good!!! I love it!!!

    Lilah
    lilahsmusicals.blogspot.com

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  10. This is so cute, but it also makes me think that whoever is speaking has a super sad past with people being unreliable and not caring. BUT IT'S SO CUTE.

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    1. why you gotta be so insightful :') HAHA, your comments are like the best, Evangeline. thank you so much!!!! :'D

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  11. Hello Olivia! I have admired and loved and cried over your blog for awhile,I'm sorry I never told you! Thank you for this, it is incredible. Please never stop!!!!!!!!!
    Lydia

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    1. WHAT IM GOING TO CRY. OH MY GOSH. THIS COMMENT >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> thank you so, so much lydia :') that means so much <3 <3

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  12. WHOA KJHKJHHKGFDDF<33333 MMMMMMHMMMM HONEY

    and heck yeah I want more of your last post SO THAT I CRY MY EYES OUT AGAIN!!!! will be refreshing my inbox

    :') love u

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    1. WHOAAAAAAAAAAA HEY I LOVE YOU
      WILL DO
      THANK U THANK U
      <33333333

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  13. You are a LITERAL queen. OH my goshhhhhhh this is so short but it has such a punch! I got all the feels. And also, yes please, I' like to read the second draft! My email is e.a.dannenbrink@gmail.com

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    1. OH MY GUUDNESS...... THANK YOU SO MUCH. ALKSFJ. I can't even. THANK UUUUUUU.and will do ^-^

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  14. This is the sweetest little piece ever! <3

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    1. AW thank you a million times, Hannah :') <3

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  15. YOU FREAKING BLEW MY MIND AGAIN AAAAHHHHHHHH <333 (my email is trapezeacm@gmail.com plz put more magic in my inbox)

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    1. WHY ARE YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS SO AMAZING I'M CRYING <3 <3 <3 UGH THANK YOU

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  16. Ahhh, the feels, man.

    Yes please, send me the final draft. You have my email already. : )

    k.

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    1. Ahhhhhhhh tHE FEELS from your comment :'D

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  17. why are you so perfect i don't understand

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    1. I think the real question is why are YOU so perfect sooooooooooooooooo

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  18. Hi Olivia! I just wanted to let you know that you have been tagged!
    Lydia

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  19. I FEEL THIS. WHAT. STOP.
    I want to read the final draft...laura.lizzy2@gmail.com
    your writing is seriously some of the best ever.

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    1. I almost died when I read this comment SO THANK YOU FOR THAT. I'M LITERALLY SO HONORED. gah <3 <3 <3

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  20. This is beautiful. I connected this it on such a deep level. You have such talent.
    Saylor // A Saylor in the Stars

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  21. late as flip but would love to hear the rest of your story, girl. IS SO GOOD. (all your writing is, but, y'know xDD)

    autumnraelin062@gmail.com

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  22. THIS IS SO LATE BUT
    i loovvveee this so much!
    ITS SO SWEET
    YOURE SO TALENTED GIRL
    VERY RELATABLE ;)

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  23. HOW HAVE I MISSED TO MANY THINGS ON YOUR BLOG?! This is way too cute for me, can't totally deal right now

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