I don't know. I guess I just didn't expect to be so surprised by you. I didn't expect you to come down the steps with sleepy eyes in the early morning light. I didn't mean to catch you so unsuspecting in your natural habitat. But it didn't seem to bother you. You didn't seem in any rush to leave. I guess I didn't expect that either.
I didn't expect you to be unshaven, drinking coffee from your mug on the couch across from me. I didn't expect the familiarity to be so comfortable. I didn't expect your muscled arm so close to mine. I didn't expect you to call me by name when you said goodbye. I didn't expect the only other person there to notice the way your eyes followed me out to my car.
I don't know. I guess I just didn't expect you.
ps if any of you want to read the final draft of my last post
comment your email address below pls and I'll send it to you
thx xoxo
your writing is so beautiful, I love it <3
ReplyDeleteyou are so sweet thank you :') <3
DeleteI am wondering who the person is that you are writing about or if the story is fiction or nonfiction. Either way I love the sense of wonder it leaves me with. Your writing is my favorite! <3
ReplyDeleteEmail address: simplyperfectone@gmail.com I'd love to read the final draft!
eh it's usually a mix x) thank you so much, vanessa!!!! your comments always make my day oh and I will send the final out soon!!
Deleteu have my email, babe. also this is something that i know, though it is smol and simple. ohoh. x
ReplyDelete"though it is smol and simple"
Delete^^^ reasons why i love u
HAHA thank u lots xoxo
so so sweet aaahh
ReplyDeleteaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :''') <3
DeleteSo beautiful! Ahhhhh! :) OMW, yes I want the final draft lol (You know my email, but here it is: fervent4him2003@gmail.com)
ReplyDeleteLOVE YOU FAITH <3 <3 <3 and will do :)
Deletegirl girl wow. just woaaaaaw i can so totally relate to this. like all the way. this is beautiful <3 i'm gonna come back and read it over and over
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Deleteu give me all the feels oh my gosh
thank you thank you thank you <3
Whoa, so heartfelt and so insightful!!!! <3
ReplyDeleteWHAT you are so kind thank you so much for reading and commenting, amelia!! <3
DeleteHOW YOU MANAGE TO BLOW ME AWAY EVERY TIME IS BESIDE ME
ReplyDeleteI’M SOBBING. I CANT. TOO MANY FEELS.
A couple other things: Write more to this. I need more. Teach me your ways. You are a writing goddess. Pizza is good. Please give me more.
xx Kenzie
MACKENZIE RAE
DeleteWHY ARE YOU SLAYING ME ON A DAILY BASIS WITH YOUR COMMENTS ON HERE
YOU ARE LITERALLY AMAZING AND WOW MIGHT CRY AT THE SUPPORT :''D YOU INSPIRE ME THANK YOU IM NOT OKAY <3 <# <3 <3 <3 ALSO PIZZA
This is so good!!! I love it!!!
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lilahsmusicals.blogspot.com
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! :'D
DeleteThis is so cute, but it also makes me think that whoever is speaking has a super sad past with people being unreliable and not caring. BUT IT'S SO CUTE.
ReplyDeletewhy you gotta be so insightful :') HAHA, your comments are like the best, Evangeline. thank you so much!!!! :'D
DeleteHello Olivia! I have admired and loved and cried over your blog for awhile,I'm sorry I never told you! Thank you for this, it is incredible. Please never stop!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteLydia
WHAT IM GOING TO CRY. OH MY GOSH. THIS COMMENT >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> thank you so, so much lydia :') that means so much <3 <3
DeleteWHOA KJHKJHHKGFDDF<33333 MMMMMMHMMMM HONEY
ReplyDeleteand heck yeah I want more of your last post SO THAT I CRY MY EYES OUT AGAIN!!!! will be refreshing my inbox
:') love u
WHOAAAAAAAAAAA HEY I LOVE YOU
DeleteWILL DO
THANK U THANK U
<33333333
hhudson412@yahoo.com
ReplyDeletethanks babe ;)
DeleteYou are a LITERAL queen. OH my goshhhhhhh this is so short but it has such a punch! I got all the feels. And also, yes please, I' like to read the second draft! My email is e.a.dannenbrink@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteOH MY GUUDNESS...... THANK YOU SO MUCH. ALKSFJ. I can't even. THANK UUUUUUU.and will do ^-^
DeleteThis is the sweetest little piece ever! <3
ReplyDeleteAW thank you a million times, Hannah :') <3
DeleteYOU FREAKING BLEW MY MIND AGAIN AAAAHHHHHHHH <333 (my email is trapezeacm@gmail.com plz put more magic in my inbox)
ReplyDeleteWHY ARE YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS SO AMAZING I'M CRYING <3 <3 <3 UGH THANK YOU
DeleteAhhh, the feels, man.
ReplyDeleteYes please, send me the final draft. You have my email already. : )
k.
Ahhhhhhhh tHE FEELS from your comment :'D
Deletewhy are you so perfect i don't understand
ReplyDeleteI think the real question is why are YOU so perfect sooooooooooooooooo
DeleteHi Olivia! I just wanted to let you know that you have been tagged!
ReplyDeleteLydia
THANK YOU got it :)
DeleteI FEEL THIS. WHAT. STOP.
ReplyDeleteI want to read the final draft...laura.lizzy2@gmail.com
your writing is seriously some of the best ever.
I almost died when I read this comment SO THANK YOU FOR THAT. I'M LITERALLY SO HONORED. gah <3 <3 <3
DeleteThis is beautiful. I connected this it on such a deep level. You have such talent.
ReplyDeleteSaylor // A Saylor in the Stars
late as flip but would love to hear the rest of your story, girl. IS SO GOOD. (all your writing is, but, y'know xDD)
ReplyDeleteautumnraelin062@gmail.com
THIS IS SO LATE BUT
ReplyDeletei loovvveee this so much!
ITS SO SWEET
YOURE SO TALENTED GIRL
VERY RELATABLE ;)
HOW HAVE I MISSED TO MANY THINGS ON YOUR BLOG?! This is way too cute for me, can't totally deal right now
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