Saturday, May 14, 2016

beautiful people #17 // asa

okay first of all if you don't know what this link up thingy is 
it's a fabulous idea. i hadn't worked on this novel idea in forever,
but this linkup totally inspired me again. this character profile thing 
is for one of my supporting characters. i'm already way too emotionally attached tbh.
here's what I have on my figment. it's just a few minutes long, so go read it pls 
and i'll definitely love you forever (but i probably will love you forever anyway)
it's called flame and shadow and here's my baby named asa. tell me what you think about him 
and tell me all about any of your lovely supporting or main characters!!!!

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asa : healing / physician / cure
he's dark haired and light olive skinned and quiet and funny and has a heart of gold or something less rich and more pure
  1. How often do they smile? Would they smile at a stranger? Often, sometimes for the benefit of others. Yes.
  2. What is the cruelest thing they’ve ever been told? And what was their reaction? First of all, please stop hurting me in this way, Cait. Too many feelings. Okay. *deep breath* His dad once told him when he was younger that he wished he'd never slept with Asa's mom, so he would never have been born (except said with more colorful language). That he's more pain than he's worth. That he's the reason for his mom's hurting.
  3. What is the kindest thing they’ve ever been told? And what was their reaction? His mom told him when he was younger that he was the light of her life- a small, bright, warm candle, keeping her company through the night, and that she wouldn't take the world over him. Hugged her almost as tight as his throat felt. From that point on, she went downhill.
  4. What is one strong memory that has stuck with your character from childhood? Why is it so powerful and lasting? This is too hard- maybe I'll share later. Don't wanna reveal too much, heh.
  5. What book (a real actual published book!) do you think your character would benefit from reading? Um, THE BIBLE. But okay, other than that.... possibly "And the Mountains Echoed" by Kahled Housseini. *continues overthinking late into the night*
  6. Have they ever been seriously injured? How severely? How did they react? Repeatedly, intermittently beaten and bruised by his father, who is a long time drunk and looks as hardened on the outside as he is inside. Bore it in as much silence as he could despite cries of pain and silent angry tears at the injustice of it and his helplessness to prevent it. Eventually learned many natural remedies, from the mom of his friend, a nurse.
  7. Do they like and get along with their neighbors? Yes, but his neighbors are kind of distant and absentee on a consistent basis.
  8. On a scale from 1 to 10 (1 being easy and 10 being difficult) how easy are they to get along with? 3. Compassionate, kind, selfless, but has firmly grounded standards of integrity that are core to his character and hard for him to see violated.
  9. If they could travel anywhere in the world, where would they go? Possibly travel to England for it's history or any Welsh countries, for some reason.
  10. Who was the last person they held hands with? His mom in anticipation of his dad coming home. More recently, with a girl. *smirks*

 

21 comments:

  1. PS SORRY THIS IS KINDA RUSHED AND ROUGH BUT I HAVE TO LEAVE FOR WORK FAST SO SORRY BYE

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    1. ok I honestly just feel like this comment looks weird without a reply so I'm just gonna do this.

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  2. aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....um okay. First, I am totally reading your figment thing because EEEEEEEEE, dude, this sounds very very very intriguing. I also feel like I don't think I knew you wrote fiction? (...<my morning grammar is impressive. wow.) THIS IS A VERY EXCITING DEVELOPMENT. BECAUSE YOU ARE BRILLIANT AND I HAVE THIS FEELING THAT THIS IS GOING TO BE A BRILLIANT BOOK. Is it finished? Or a work in progress? Either way, this character sounds like the bomb, and also adorable and dream boyfriend goals. ok I'm done.

    this is exciting.

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    1. pslfkjsldkjflkdsjlfjd. WOW SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU FOR THAT (and also just reasons).
      dUDE. how do I talk to you you are so nice to me. it is a vERY slow work in progress but I am gaining new inspiration in the form of visions (jk) I'm the kind of person that plans an entire characters life story and features and obscure quirks and various scenes and maps and names and then don't know the actual plot hah heha ha. it's a problem. GAHHHH I feel the same way. I'd be perfectly happy if he just very presumptuously waltzed into my life, beautiful, broken soul that he is. K, sorry- there I go rambling on about my character again. Oops. x

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  3. So I actually clicked on the link, like, the second I saw that there was one, even before the "I'll love you forever if you click this" comment. So basically I read your mind which I think is pretty cool.

    1. OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH AND ASA IS A SWEET BABY ANGEL THAT I REALLY WANT TO HUG.

    2. Um, HE AND HAVEN ARE SO FLIPPING PERFECT LIKE THEY WERE ONLY IN WHAT, TWO CHAPTERS TOGETHER? AND I'M PLANNING A WEDDING.

    3. I just want your writing skills so if you could like, email me a link to The Guide On Writing Like Olivia Knight that would be great thx.

    4. I actually want to kill his father right now this isn't okay.

    5. WHY MUST YOU SMIRK AT ME AND CAUSE ME FANGIRL PAIN? Such an author.

    6. I was honestly cracking up when you were like, "Um, THE BIBLE". Because for some reason the image of you randomly popping up in this fictional world with a Bible and shoving it in Asa's hands and then running off popped into my head and I just started laughing really hard.

    Basically this is perfect and you're amazing. And my comment is really long dear heavens.

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    1. I think our souls are just linked actually. Your comment makes me look like this ^-^
      1. YOU JUST KNOW MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE SAME
      2. same same same
      3. *stutters and flushes and mumbles incoherent thanks repeatedly*
      4. you're right- you need to examine your heart over that ;)
      5. /fdlslslslslnnsnmmsn fangirling over you fangirling over my writing rn. This is ridiculous (ly wonderful).
      6. HAHAHA I TOTALLY WOULD THOUGH.
      I loved it :'))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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  4. OH THIS IS PAIN AND FEELS THOUGH, OMG. *quietly plots to kidnap Asa and feed him warm pretzels* The precious darling. AHEM. ANYWAY. I loved reading this!! Even though I already feel monstrously sad for Asa and WANT HIM PROTECTED.
    Thanks for joining in. :D

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    1. HAHA, cait, you're absolutely perfect. it was monstrous loads of fun ;) thanks for the questions and comment xxxxxxxxxxx

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  5. ASA THE POOR BEAN. Now I want to take him home and wrap him in blankets and pet him and give him cake.

    Ellie | On the Other Side of Reality

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    1. how do you people just get me???? ME TOO, LET'S DO IT TOGETHER. <3

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  6. I feel so bad for Asa, he is seems so sweet and broken.

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    1. right?????????? all the feels over him :') thanks for reading, skye x

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  7. Oooouuuu Asa!!I think I'm in love... ;) he seems like such a likeable character! I've never done a beautiful people link-up, but they look like fun...!

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    1. hahaha, yess thank you so much ;) YES, you should definitely do one!!!!

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  8. Also I would love to have you do a guest post on my blog about character development or writing emotional scenes or literally anything about your writing process with characters(!) Let me know if you'd be interested! ♡

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    1. OH MY WORD so honored. ahhhhhhhh, I'd love to! I literally don't know what my process is though, I'd have to think about it hahahaha, but YES absolutely ^-^

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  9. HOLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GIRL. HOLY GIRL. <3 you just did something to my heart that i may or may not forgive you for okay. GAH. SAKJDJAKDJLSADS ASAAAAA COME HOME TO MEEEE OMG. I WILL PROTECT YOU FROM OLIVIA WHO WILL PROBABLY MAKE YOU SUFFER AND THINGS. xD So I just popped over and read your figment fragment (WHICH HAS BEEN THERE FOR A WHILE YET SOMEHOW I DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT IT?! HOWWW IS THIS POSSIBLE?!?!? HOW.) And wwwhoaaa. girl. I cannot right now maybe later

    "I'm the kind of person that plans an entire characters life story and features and obscure quirks and various scenes and maps and names and then don't know the actual plot hah heha ha." << YEP I'M QUOTING YOUR REPLY TO MY SISTER'S COMMENT XD BECAUSE I AM ALSO THAT PERSON YESSSSSSSSS. *high fives and waffle party* Like I came up with a story idea (or the lack therof heh) and was telling Kate a few weeks ago and I'm just unloading all this stuff about the characters and backstory and where it's taking place and what everyone looks like and she's like, "cool. what's the plot?" aND I'M LIKE "..." xD *head desk* UGGGHH IT'S KIND OF A PROBLEM?? but at least I have squishy characters to love while thinking about the rest of the actual story. XD

    OKAY. NOW I CAN SWOON OVER YOUR WRITING SOME MORE. "[he] has a heart of gold or something less rich and more pure" *FLAILS AND WANTS TO STEAL THAT SO BAD* "Hugged her almost as tight as his throat felt." *IS WEEPING AT THE BEAUTY OF THAT* LIKE HOWWW?!?! HOW. I need Haven (love that name btw) and Asa to be together okay pls tell me this will happen because I SMELL WONDROUS CHEMISTRY GAHHH.

    i need to read the rest of this book
    which means you need to write it okay ;)

    GAH I LOVE YOU DUDE. ♥

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    1. DUDE DUDE DUDE DYUDREIORJSDKFJDDKLJFJKDKFJD. YOU LITERALLY HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY YOUR COMMENT MADE ME. FLLLSLSHHMMDSM. I WAS LITERALLY LAUGHING TO MYSELF IN THE BATHROOM AT CLASS READING BC SO MUCH LOVE. gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhkfjdk yes pls protect him because i can't have not hurting characters SRSLY WHAT. I cause myself too much pain ;) GAH YOU READ IT?! MY SOUL IS BURSTING.
      HAHAHAHA GAH yOU UNDERSTAND M<EEEEE. same same same same. this is whERE i was laughing because that is literally a history of my entire writing career. but it's all so good. LIKE LITERALLY i have a whole character planned (with no plot or any semblance of a story) and all I have is that her name is going to be nova (like a supernova: the explosion of a star in which the star may reach a maximum intrinsic luminosity one billion times that of the sun BUT THEN DESTROYS ITSELF) that IS GOING TO BE HER CHARACTER ARCH. THAT'S LITERALLY ALL I HAVe BUT ONE DAY I WILL USE IT WATCH ME (maybe)
      I AM FLAILINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU yes I am hoping for that to happen (despite some bumps and bruises along the waY) but hoping for beautiful marriage and babies in their future tbh. <3333
      okiokiok. PLS MAKE ME DO THIS THIS SUMMER. IM RLY HOPING TO. I NEED TO FORCE MYSELF TO DO IT THOUGH. and possible reward myself with waffles for every other word. also sorry for all the caps. i can't contain myself.
      GAH I LOVE YOU MOARRRR.

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    2. GAAAHAHSDJDLSAKDJ DUDE IT MAKES ME BURSTING WITH HAPPINESS TO KNOW THAT THIS MADE YOU HAPPY EEEEEP. <3 <3 <3 SO much love. omg YES I READ IT. there is so much richness (but not in like a grrr too rich way in JUST THE RIGHT WAY) and depth of characters like I CAN ALREADY FEEEL THE CHARACTERS LIKE I KNOW THEM AND I BARELY DO <<< EARMARK OF TALENT OK. <3 yesss you need to write it this summer do it do it! and DEFINITELY reward yoself with waffles. ;)


      THAT
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      how.

      how does your brain work like i probably couldn't even handle looking inside for a sec tbh

      hoLYYYY SMOKES IT SOUNDS SO FREAKING COOL. <3

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    3. DUDE DUDE DUUUUUDE THANK YOUUUU. ALL THE FEELS. OK I WILL FORCE MYSELF TO WRITE IT. I NEED IT TBH.
      how does your brain work like i probably couldn't even handle looking inside for a sec tbh <<<<<< YOU KILL ME. LIKE YOU LITERALLY KILL ME. literally same but about you. ALL THE SAMPLES OF YOUR WRITING SLAYYYYYY. ok i'm gonna do that character cause you give me sO MucH suPPorT. XD

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  10. Just read this from the link on your latest post and GAH. This is great. He is great. It all is great. "He was the light of her life- a small, bright, warm candle, keeping her company through the night." WOWZA. Write the book! I want to read it!

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